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AEIS備考經 | 注意寫作六大關鍵點,作文輕松拿高分

2021 年 3 月 20 日 医学界儿科频道

距離AEIS開考

還剩6天!

進入最後沖刺階段!

2019年的AEIS考試時間

新加坡教育部(MOE)官網正式對外公布2019年AEIS考試定于2019年9月17日、18日和19日舉行,報名時間將于7月開始,教育部也將于7月公布更多報名及考試詳情。

AEIS考試正式進入十天倒計時

抓緊最後時間沖刺

寫作的六個關鍵點

一定要留意

一.時態的表達方法

時態的學習我們從最初學習英語就開始了,但是可能同學們從未意識到的一點是:時態,除了在我們初高中英語課本上學習的“什麽時間用什麽時態”之外,還有一項重要作用:時態帶出時間。

1.現在我們總比過去好的多。

Anyway, things are much better than before.

(than before自然就是今昔對比,不用再有at present)

2.上海,目前完全有條件搞的更快一點。

Shanghai is another example. It has all the necessary conditions for faster progess.

(同理)

3.當前,全世界都在關注著我國的改革。

The whole word is watching the reforms in our country.

(is watching現在進行時,“當前”可以省了)

4.未來經濟發展在很大程度上取決于……

The development of our economy in the futurewill, to a large extent depend on…The development of our economy will depend on a large extent on….、

(對比兩句,will就是將來,所以in the future的時間表示可以去了)

5.過去兩個超級大國主宰世界,現在情況變了。  

The worldused tobe dominated by two superpowers. Now things have changed.

(同理)

6.過去沒有人知道淮河能夠徒步的……

Nobody had ever known that one could walk across the ……

(同理)

二.數的表達方法

1.我們應該采取一系列措施……

We should adopta series ofmeasures to ensure that…We should adopt measures to ensure that…

(measures一個複數即是很多的意思,a series of 可以不要)

2.在這一時期,多種物資的供應嚴重缺乏。

Throughout this period, there was severe shortage ofa great variety of goods.

Throughout this period, there was severe supplies shortage.

(同理)

3.深入實際工作對找到各種問題的解決辦法十分重要。

Plunging yourselves into practical work is very important for you to find solutions toall sorts of problems.

To solve these problems, it is important that you plunge yourself into practical work.

(同理)

三.動詞性重複

1986年,國家教育委員會,衛生部文件:外國留學生和研究學者,須做艾滋病檢查,對堅持不接受檢查,且勸說無效的,不得安排學習。

The 1986 document of the state education commission and MOH states: foreign students, researchers, and scholars must undergo an AIDS test; persons who refuse and cannot beto do somay not be accepted for studies.

(請注意對于“堅持不接受檢查,且勸說無效”直接一個so,簡單清晰,如果讓大家寫,是不是有是一大串定語從句了呢)

四.名詞性重複

最後,20年來,中國發生了很大變化,包括中國的權利系統和中國的法律制度,但是,發生在中國的權利系統和法律制度方便的變化卻並沒有像有些人說的那麽大,甚至可以說,在這方面沒有發生本質性的變化,這就是中國官方說的政治體制改革滯後的問題。

Lastly, many changes have taken place in China in the past 20 years, including those in the power structure and legal system. However,such changesare not great as…..

(同理如上)

五.用其他名詞做總結

堅持緊急建設必須依靠科學技術,科學技術工作必須面向經濟建設的原則,促進科技與經濟的有機結合。

We must ensure that economic development is driven by science and technology, and that development of science and technology is geared to the needs of economic development, and enable science and technology to serve the economy.

We must ensure that economic development is driven by science and technology, and that development of science and technology is geared to the needs of economic development.The two aspects must be well-harmonized.

六.省略漢語中的範疇詞

名詞性範疇,動詞性範疇。

先科普一下什麽是範疇詞:範疇詞是指漢語命名中傾向于加範疇的詞語,如 問題、狀態、情況、工作,有時本身沒有實質的意義,翻譯時可以省去不譯。

比如“貧富差距的問題”,如果直譯爲“the problem regarding the wealth gap” 並沒有錯,但比較啰嗦,因爲差距本身就是一個問題,因此在翻譯中可將範疇詞“問題”刪除,下面請看例子:

1.計劃工作

a serious mistake in the work of planninga serious mistake in planning

2.密切合作的關系

to ensure a relationship of close cooperation between…to ensure close cooperation between…

3.鋪張浪費的行爲

we must oppose the practice of extravagancewe must oppose extravagance

4.采取……的態度

we must adopt the attitude of …..

we should admit …..

七.消除同義重複出現

這是通向富裕和繁榮的唯一出路。

This is the only road leading to affluence and prosperity.

This is the only road to prosperity.

如何寫好書信體作文結尾

優質案例走一波

1.如果你認爲我能幫上任何忙的話,請盡管告訴我,我會盡力的。

If you think that I can be of any help, please let me know and I’ll certainly do what I can.

2.然而,如果你們能夠給我調換一台相機或者是退還我錢的話,怎麽方便就怎麽做,我將十分的滿意。

I would, however, be perfectly satisfied if you would kindly replace the camera or refund my money, whichever is more convenient.

3.我希望看到你們進行及時的調查並隨時告知我事情的進展如何。

I would like to see a timely investigation conducted and would like to be informed of the progress.

4.我希望你們聯系一下我買車的汽車經銷商,對你們的錯誤做出解釋。

I would like you to contact the auto dealer where I bought the car, explaining your error.

5.我希望這些建議能夠在你做決定時有所裨益。

I hope you find these suggestions useful in helping you make your decision.

6.同時,如果此問題不能得以迅速解決,我希望您能允許我搬入另外一個房間。

Meanwhile, if the problem cannot be solved quickly, I would like you to allow me to move to another room.

7.您能否就我的課程和考試事項給我一些建議,特別是針對我目前的狀況是否能夠給予我一些特別的關照?

Would you please advise me regarding my courses and exams, particularly if there will be any special consideration given to me in light of my current situation?

8.如果您能盡快派一位工程人員前來維修一下我房間裏的供暖系統,我將十分感謝。

I would be most grateful if you would send an engineer to fix the heating system in my room as soon as possible.

9.我十分樂意支付由此而涉及到的相關服務費用。

I will of course be willing to pay for any service charge involved.

10.我希望以上信息能夠使你在我的家鄉玩得愉快。

I hope the above information will help you enjoy your stay in my hometown.

11.鑒于我們深感應該得到某種補償,我們訴求你們全額退還我們的餐費。

Since we feel we should be compensated somehow, we ask you to refund the total cost of our meal.

12.好吧,我就寫到這裏吧,我已經迫不及待地期盼著你對這封信的回複了。

Well, let me finish here and I am already eagerly awaiting your reply to this first letter.

13.做不到這一點,我將不得不堅持要你們全額退還我所支付的全價。

Failing that, I will have to insist on a refund in full of the price which I paid for it.  

14.敬請馬上取消我的卡,並請做出必要的安排發給我另一張卡。

Could you please cancel my card immediately and make the necessary arrangements to issue me with a replacement card?

15.假如你們有必要給我打電話,我的號碼是123456789。

Should you ever wish to call me, here is my number: 123456789.

16.無論如何,請確認能否前來。

Anyway, do let me know if you can make it.

17.我希望您會發現他確如我所推薦的他那樣好。

I hope you’ll find he is just as good as I’m now recommending him to be.

18.如果您還有什麽別的問題,敬請隨時聯系我,我的電子郵箱地址如:

And should you have any further questions, please feel free to contact me at the following e-mail address.

19.我隨信附上了我的簡曆以及我目前經濟狀況的一份明細和我的英語等級證明。

I have enclosed my resume as well as a statement of my current financial status and my English proficiency level.

20.我還想問一下我和我太太是否可以合在一起申請,還是我們必須要分開來。

I’d also like to know if my wife and I can make one application, or whether we’ll have to apply separately.

21.我期盼早日收到您的信息。

I look forward to receiving the information at your earliest convenience.

22.我將于8月26日從上海抵達倫敦,如果您能派人接一下或者至少給我發一下我該如何獨自從倫敦Heathrow機場前往大學的詳細情況我將萬分感激,因爲這將是我初次到英國。

I will arrive in London on August 26 from Shanghai and would be very grateful if you could send someone to pick me up or, at the least, send me the details of how to get to the university by myself from London Heathrow Airport, as this will be my first time to the UK. 

23.我隨信附上了我的簡曆,裏面詳細列舉了我的資曆和經曆,還有一份加州大學的公開推薦信。

I have enclosed my resume that outlines in detail my qualifications and experience as well as an open letter of recommendation from California State University.

24.你能否告訴我獲得學生簽證我需要做些什麽,還有就是這個過程需要多久?

Could you tell me what I have to do to obtain a student visa and how long the process will take?

25.我還非常感激如果你能告訴我我都該隨身帶些什麽東西,比如衣服、書籍或其它我在加拿大沒法買到的東西。

I would also be grateful if you could tell me what I should bring with me, for example, clothes, books or anything else I cannot get in Canada.

26.如果還能夠申請會員資格,我期望你們能給我寄張加入貴俱樂部的申請表來,並告知我由此所涉及到的費用問題。

If memberships are still available, I would appreciate it very much if you would send me an application form for joining the club and let me know the fee involved.

27.請告知我是否可以成爲貴圖書館的臨時會員,以及開館的時間和收費等方面的信息。

Please let me know if it is possible to become a temporary member of the library, together with details of opening hours, fees, etc.

28.隨信有我的簡曆,詳細介紹了我以前的工作經驗和資曆。

Enclosed you will find my resume which further details my previous work experience and qualifications.

29.我還想請求退還學費,而且希望我不至于太晚了,沒法全額償還了。

I would also like to request a tuition refund and hope I am not too late to receive the full reimbursement.

高分作文

有技巧

認真審題

考生切忌信手拈來,提筆就寫,根本不審題,想到哪兒就寫到哪兒,置考試要求于不顧,作文第一步是仔細審題,考生要仔細閱讀試題要求及相關信息,如文字,圖畫等,准確把握出題者意圖。

列出提綱,慎重落筆

雖說考試時間有限,但是切忌匆忙落筆開始胡寫亂謅。

你可以先花一點時間列個提綱,對原始材料分析歸納後要形成一個基本的框架。

文章打算分幾段寫,每段大概怎樣寫,自數控制在多少,開頭段落是道破主題,點名要旨,引人入勝還是先給出主題一般的背景情況和對主題進行濃縮的陳述呢,中間段落和結尾有怎樣寫呢。這些都要心中有數。

列好提綱開始落筆寫作的過程中,要注意如下兩點:

1

突出重點,注重邏輯

考生在選擇材料時應注重選擇那些最能體現中心思想、最具代表性的材料,這些材料要共同表達一致的信息。

選材時切忌胡子眉毛一把抓。詞語堆積,不倫不類。前後及段落之間在邏輯關系上要緊密銜接,不能把沒有任何邏輯關系的詞放在一起。可以用恰當的關聯詞把思想連貫的表達出來。

2

用詞准確,語法正確

考試時要特別注意語法,此語,語氣,標點符號等。

爲了避免太多單詞拼寫錯誤,語法錯誤,不要爲了追求詞語的華麗而堆積一些自己也沒把握的單詞,不要刻意追求長句而寫一些自己不知對錯的有多個從句組成的長句。

考試時最好選擇自己最有把握的詞彙,短語,句式。

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